Today’s theme for 1 Line Wednesday, sponsored by RWA’s Kiss of Death Chapter is Similes or Metaphors. This might be my favorite theme to date. I never metaphor I didn’t like (bu-du-bum, I’ll be here all week). This from Chapter 5 of The Uprising from Evan’s point of view.
I stare at his retreating form, feeling as if I’ve just consumed a buffet full of emotions.
And to celebrate revisions being complete and the final edits before going out to beta readers, I’m including a second one from Chapter 13 from Cyrus’s point of view.
She whispers my name like a plea, and I’m falling, stepping off a ledge into the unknown.
You can see previous week’s themes and lines here.